Monday, January 5, 2009

How to reveal success or failure of protagonist

End chapter with Steve about to launch (whatever that may mean) money making scheme.

Start next chapter with Steve at an all-hands meeting. Boss gives Steve the floor to report on some mundane work news/information. Steve explains that he means no offense, but working is for losers (perhaps he uses a duller hatchet). He then surprisingly lets his co-workers know that he's moving on to try other things.

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